Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

This is for all you sexy girls out there

I feel your body close to mine

I hear your breath and mine in time

I know I'm nothing but it's you that I need

I touch your skin and it starts to feed

My eyes meet yours in secret glance

Our bodies look in ancient stance

You whisper something and I know it's good

you're acting crazy just like I knew you would

Embracing my life between your thighs

We will perform in the deadly skies

Reducing my mind to endless nights

You send my dreams to their demise

Realized by your last breath

I take your hair into my hands

I pull it tight to fill your demands

I feed my body into yours

I know it's right cause it's my soul you stir

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

yummy!!!

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

Thanks!

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

okay...find something else to do with your tyme!!!

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

u r sick. go recit this to your mama!

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

I really like the last stanza...a turn-on. "..perform in the deadly skies" that's just silly. "...".look in ancient stance"? Another silly phrase... just to make it rhyme with "glance". Phooey. I hate it when someone ruins an otherwise good poem with ineffective rhymes. However, I'm no poet...I just know what I like and the 1st and last stanzas I LIKE.

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

It sounds like you need to run things by hand untill you get it off the ground.

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

aw, shucks... (hangs his head and blushes)... you masher, you animal, you beast, I did not know you cared, thanks anyhow...

Here is one for all you hotties out there!!?

great